git: 4e7c60196a - main - FreeBSD-related publications: correction, update

From: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 09 Jul 2023 13:16:16 UTC
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=4e7c60196a119d7d45675cbe9e2930925b0d8138

commit 4e7c60196a119d7d45675cbe9e2930925b0d8138
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-07-09 13:06:13 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-07-09 13:06:13 +0000

    FreeBSD-related publications: correction, update
    
    Fix a broken link (review D40951).
    
    Hyphenation (FreeBSD-related, CD-ROMs).
    
    Drag part of the page into the twenty-first century, through more
    generic use of the phrase 'optical discs'.
    
    Refrain from promoting the www@ mailto address for contact purposes.
    
    Describe the Release Information page as such.
    
    Other minor changes.
    
    Differential-revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40951
---
 website/content/en/publish.adoc | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/publish.adoc b/website/content/en/publish.adoc
index c0c1b3dfb5..8533d834fa 100644
--- a/website/content/en/publish.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/publish.adoc
@@ -1,27 +1,27 @@
 ---
-title: "FreeBSD Related Publications"
+title: "FreeBSD-related Publications"
 sidenav: about
 ---
 
 include::shared/en/urls.adoc[]
 
-= FreeBSD Related Publications
+= FreeBSD-related Publications
 
 [width="100%",cols="50%,50%",]
 |===
 |image:../gifs/daemon.gif[FreeBSD Daemon,width=80,height=76] a|
-* <<books,BOOKS>>
-* <<cdroms,CDROMS>>
-* <<magazines,MAGAZINES>>
-* link:../press/[PRESS]
-
+* <<books,books>>
+* <<cdroms,optical discs>>
+* <<magazines,magazines>>
+* link:../press/[press]
 |===
 
-Here you will find the covers of many FreeBSD related publications. If you know of any additional FreeBSD publications/CDROMs let us know, at www@FreeBSD.org, so that they may be added to this site.
+-- if you know of any other FreeBSD-related publication, please https://www.freebsd.org/mailto/[let us know].
 
-The link:{handbook}[FreeBSD Handbook] contains a considerably longer link:{handbook}#bibliography[bibliography].
+Covers and descriptions of various FreeBSD-related publications appear below.
+Click any image to see a larger version.
 
-Click on any of the graphics to see a larger version.
+The link:{handbook}[FreeBSD Handbook] includes a broader link:{handbook}bibliography/[bibliography].
 
 [[books]]
 == Books
@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ http://www.acikkod.com/pdfs/freebsd1.pdf[Table of Contents] (in Turkish)
 |===
 
 [[cdroms]]
-== CDROMs
+== CD-ROMs and DVDs
 
-For more about recent releases go to link:../releases/[FreeBSD release information page].
+For information about recent releases of the operating system, please see link:../releases/[Release Information].
 
 [.tblbasic]
 [width="100%",cols="20%,80%",]