git: 91b4219307 - main - Release errata errata (punctuation) and markup
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Date: Sun, 09 Jul 2023 06:33:34 UTC
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=91b42193074b3e6a1ecc97c794f5b5921403a2ed
commit 91b42193074b3e6a1ecc97c794f5b5921403a2ed
Author: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-07-09 06:25:22 +0000
Commit: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-07-09 06:25:22 +0000
Release errata errata (punctuation) and markup
Late follow-up to
d343022941 12.4R/errata: beautify the open issues area
- that included a correction to punctuation in the first paragraph of
the introduction.
For 13.0R, 13.1R, and 13.2R:
- add the missing full stop
- improve markup (line breaks).
Pull-request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/214
---
website/content/en/releases/13.0R/errata.adoc | 10 +++++++---
website/content/en/releases/13.1R/errata.adoc | 10 +++++++---
website/content/en/releases/13.2R/errata.adoc | 10 +++++++---
3 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/errata.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/errata.adoc
index 324c2d0ed5..2ac645324a 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/errata.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/errata.adoc
@@ -11,7 +11,9 @@ sidenav: download
== Abstract
-This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation. This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability. An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
+This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation.
+This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability.
+An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release of FreeBSD {releaseNext}.
@@ -26,9 +28,11 @@ This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release
[[intro]]
== Introduction
-This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release} Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
+This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release}.
+Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
-Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release. These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
+Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release.
+These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
Source and binary snapshots of FreeBSD {releaseBranch} also contain up-to-date copies of this document (as of the time of the snapshot).
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/errata.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/errata.adoc
index 1f78eda041..c5ebada115 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/errata.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/errata.adoc
@@ -11,7 +11,9 @@ sidenav: download
== Abstract
-This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation. This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability. An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
+This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation.
+This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability.
+An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release of FreeBSD {releaseNext}.
@@ -26,9 +28,11 @@ This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release
[[intro]]
== Introduction
-This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release} Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
+This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release}.
+Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
-Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release. These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
+Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release.
+These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
Source and binary snapshots of FreeBSD {releaseBranch} also contain up-to-date copies of this document (as of the time of the snapshot).
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/errata.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/errata.adoc
index 36a79d56ac..d791e11221 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/errata.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/errata.adoc
@@ -11,7 +11,9 @@ sidenav: download
== Abstract
-This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation. This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability. An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
+This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation.
+This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability.
+An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release of FreeBSD {releaseNext}.
@@ -26,9 +28,11 @@ This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the release
[[intro]]
== Introduction
-This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release} Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
+This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release}.
+Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
-Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release. These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
+Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release.
+These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
Source and binary snapshots of FreeBSD {releaseBranch} also contain up-to-date copies of this document (as of the time of the snapshot).