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Sun, 15 Jan 2023 17:13:54 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Sun, 15 Jan 2023 17:13:54 GMT Message-Id: <202301151713.30FHDsbU013484@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Ceri Davies Subject: git: b158d161c0 - main - handbook/bsdinstall: minor rewording of install guidance List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: ceri X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: b158d161c04e7a69b2e67cac5b9a0567bc5e9f8e Auto-Submitted: auto-generated X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N The branch main has been updated by ceri: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=b158d161c04e7a69b2e67cac5b9a0567bc5e9f8e commit b158d161c04e7a69b2e67cac5b9a0567bc5e9f8e Author: Ceri Davies AuthorDate: 2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000 Commit: Ceri Davies CommitDate: 2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000 handbook/bsdinstall: minor rewording of install guidance --- documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc index bc1bb8da48..8792882f2e 100644 --- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc @@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ If a wireless network interface is chosen, the system will instead scan for wire .Scanning for Wireless Access Points image::bsdinstall-configure-wireless-scan.png[Menu showing wireless network scanning.] -Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID), a short, unique name given to each network. +Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID); a short, unique name given to each network. SSIDs found during the scan are listed, followed by a description of the encryption types available for that network. If the desired SSID does not appear in the list, select btn:[Rescan] to scan again. If the desired network still does not appear, check for problems with antenna connections or try moving the computer closer to the access point. @@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ If a DHCP server is available, select btn:[Yes] in the next menu to automaticall The installer will appear to pause for a minute or so as it finds the DHCP server and obtains the addressing information for the system. [[bsdinstall-net-ipv4-dhcp]] -.Choose IPv4DHCP Configuration +.Choose IPv4 DHCP Configuration image::bsdinstall-configure-network-interface-ipv4-dhcp.png[Menu indicating if DHCP wants to be configured for the selected interface.] If a DHCP server is not available, select btn:[No] and input the following addressing information in this menu: @@ -1004,11 +1004,11 @@ image::bsdinstall-config-services.png[Menu showing the different services availa Here is a summary of the services that can be enabled in this menu: -* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is the unbound of the base system and is only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network install package:dns/unbound[]. +* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is a configuration only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network, install package:dns/unbound[]. * `sshd` - The Secure Shell (SSH) daemon is used to remotely access a system over an encrypted connection. Only enable this service if the system should be available for remote logins. * `moused` - Enable this service if the mouse will be used from the command-line system console. -* `ntpdate` - Enable the automatic clock synchronization at boot time. The functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd[8] daemon. After a suitable period of mourning, the man:ntpdate[8] utility will be retired. -* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if there is a Windows(R), Kerberos, LDAP server on the network, or to use a remote server pool is desired. +* `ntpdate` - Enable automatic clock synchronization at boot time. Note that the functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd[8] daemon and the man:ntpdate[8] utility will soon be retired. +* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if you wish to synchronise your system clock with a remote time server or pool. * `powerd` - System power control utility for power control and energy saving. * `dumpdev` - Crash dumps are useful when debugging issues with the system, so users are encouraged to enable them.