git: dd4fd11723 - main - status: 2023q1: PkgBase.live: minor changes

From: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sat, 01 Apr 2023 14:52:44 UTC
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=dd4fd1172308c8a7b50ec99b1d9bfca8aef80b2b

commit dd4fd1172308c8a7b50ec99b1d9bfca8aef80b2b
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-04-01 14:36:19 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-04-01 14:36:19 +0000

    status: 2023q1: PkgBase.live: minor changes
    
    Correct the reference to 'up.bsd.lv'.
    
    Whilst here: a handful of other minor changes.
    
    Approved by:  Mina Galić <freebsd@igalic.co>, status (salvadore)
    Pull request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/148
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 .../en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/pkgbase.live.adoc       | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/pkgbase.live.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/pkgbase.live.adoc
index 25d5c0f6c2..38d02d7cad 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/pkgbase.live.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/pkgbase.live.adoc
@@ -7,18 +7,18 @@ link:https://codeberg.org/pkgbase/website[Website source] URL: link:https://code
 Contact: Mina Galić <freebsd@igalic.co>
 
 PkgBase.live _was_ an unofficial repository for the FreeBSD link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/PkgBase[PkgBase project].
-As a service, PkgBase.live was inspired by link:https://up.bsd.lv/[up.bsd.live], which provides man:freebsd-update[8] for STABLE and CURRENT branches.
+As a service, PkgBase.live was inspired by link:https://up.bsd.lv/[], which provides man:freebsd-update[8] for STABLE and CURRENT branches.
 
 Hardware for PkgBase was kindly sponsored by a member of the FreeBSD community.
-However, as life and projects moved on, they had to decommission the hardware, giving me three months notice.
+However, as life and projects moved on, they had to decommission the hardware, giving me three months' notice.
 In that time, my own life was rather turbulent after a recent move to a different country so I haven't been able to find a replacement.
 
 For the time being, PkgBase.live is dead.
 
-The website, and with it the link:https://codeberg.org/pkgbase/website/src/branch/main/howto/howdo.md[How Did She Do it?!] is still available in link:https://codeberg.org/pkgbase/website[Git].
+The website, and with it the link:https://codeberg.org/pkgbase/website/src/branch/main/howto/howdo.md[How Did She Do it?!] are still available in link:https://codeberg.org/pkgbase/website[Git].
 I highly encourage copy-cats.
 
-But I will also happily accept a new hardware sponsor!
+I will also happily accept a new hardware sponsor!
 
-Please note that I _have_ contacted the FreeBSD project, and they _are_ working on integrating PkgBase into release engineering.
-However, they are not yet ready, and they also cannot "simply" take over PkgBase.live because it uses a completely different process.
+Please note that I _have_ contacted the FreeBSD Project, and they _are_ working on integrating PkgBase into release engineering.
+However, they are not yet ready, they also cannot "simply" take over PkgBase.live because it uses a completely different process.