git: fdceb99e22 - main - Improve vocabulary in FDP overview chapter
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Date: Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:41:06 UTC
The branch main has been updated by carlavilla:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=fdceb99e222c8ce9eb585b9ed0dfa8e569e6aa1d
commit fdceb99e222c8ce9eb585b9ed0dfa8e569e6aa1d
Author: Wang Yan Hao <bses30074@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: 2022-06-29 20:40:32 +0000
Commit: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2022-06-29 20:40:32 +0000
Improve vocabulary in FDP overview chapter
PR: 264884
---
documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/overview/_index.adoc | 10 +++++-----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/overview/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/overview/_index.adoc
index c1a907a89f..157e6ea499 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/overview/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/overview/_index.adoc
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ please generate the [.filename]#.diff# from the base of your documentation tree.
+
In the example above, changes have been made to the *bsdinstall* portion of the Handbook.
+
-. Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _[patch] short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the changes and any important details about them. Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system.
+. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _[patch] short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the changes and any important details about them. Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system.
====
[[gnu-linux-installation-process]]
@@ -229,11 +229,11 @@ To make it easier for committers to apply the patch on their working copy of the
please generate the [.filename]#.diff# from the base of your documentation tree.
======
+
-. Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system.
+. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system.
If using the web form, enter a Summary of _short description of problem_.
Select the Component `Documentation`.
In the Description field, enter a short description of the problem in the _Summary_ field and add _patch_ to the _Keywords_ field.
-Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file.
+Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file.
Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system.
====
@@ -311,11 +311,11 @@ To make it easier for committers to apply the patch on their working copy of the
please generate the [.filename]#.diff# from the base of your documentation tree.
======
+
-. Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system.
+. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system.
If using the web form, enter a Summary of _short description of problem_.
Select the Component `Documentation`.
In the Description field, enter a short description of the problem in the _Summary_ field and add _patch_ to the _Keywords_ field.
-Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file.
+Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file.
Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system.
====