git: 854a55b668 - main - Use one sentence per line in privacy page. No other changes.

The branch main has been updated by carlavilla:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=854a55b6688944d1425403209d4208bd9eadbda9

commit 854a55b6688944d1425403209d4208bd9eadbda9
Author:     Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2022-08-27 09:40:29 +0000
Commit:     Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2022-08-27 09:40:29 +0000

    Use one sentence per line in privacy page. No other changes.
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 website/content/en/privacy.adoc | 49 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 38 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/privacy.adoc b/website/content/en/privacy.adoc
index 042eb0861e..4679d7e317 100644
--- a/website/content/en/privacy.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/privacy.adoc
@@ -7,29 +7,47 @@ sidenav: about
 
 == Privacy Policy
 
-The FreeBSD Project recognizes that your privacy and the protection of your personal information is important to you and is committed to protecting your privacy. This Privacy Policy describes the measures taken by us to protect your privacy in connection with your use of www.FreeBSD.org (our "Site"). This policy does not cover mirrors of this content on other hosts (the "Mirrors") or other FreeBSD-related services in the FreeBSD.org domain ("Affiliated Sites").
+The FreeBSD Project recognizes that your privacy and the protection of your personal information is important to you and is committed to protecting your privacy.
+This Privacy Policy describes the measures taken by us to protect your privacy in connection with your use of www.FreeBSD.org (our "Site").
+This policy does not cover mirrors of this content on other hosts (the "Mirrors") or other FreeBSD-related services in the FreeBSD.org domain ("Affiliated Sites").
 
 This policy was last modified on October 19, 2012.
 
-PLEASE READ THIS PRIVACY POLICY CAREFULLY. BY USING THIS SITE, YOU AGREE TO THE TERMS OF THIS POLICY.
+PLEASE READ THIS PRIVACY POLICY CAREFULLY.
+BY USING THIS SITE, YOU AGREE TO THE TERMS OF THIS POLICY.
 
 == What information is collected on our Site:
 
-When you visit our Site we gather information regarding your use of our site, such as the pages you view and the time you view each page. We also collect information such as your Internet Protocol ("IP") address, browser type and operating system information. The foregoing information is collectively referred to below as "Your Usage Data."
+When you visit our Site we gather information regarding your use of our site, such as the pages you view and the time you view each page.
+We also collect information such as your Internet Protocol ("IP") address, browser type and operating system information.
+The foregoing information is collectively referred to below as "Your Usage Data."
 
-We store information such as your email address, name, and organization or company ("Personally Identifiable Information") only if you decide to send us such information by submitting a FreeBSD bug or problem report ("PR"), subscribing to one of the FreeBSD mailing lists or posting content to our Site forums. The FreeBSD Project allows unlimited distribution of that content. Information submitted in those reports and lists, including your Personally Identifiable Information, is considered public and will be accessible to anyone on the web. Such information is not only stored on servers belonging to the FreeBSD Foundation, but it is also stored on other servers that mirror the content of our Site. The FreeBSD Foundation has no control over the use of that information, including your Personally Identifiable Information.
+We store information such as your email address, name, and organization or company ("Personally Identifiable Information") only if you decide to send us such information by submitting a FreeBSD bug or problem report ("PR"),
+subscribing to one of the FreeBSD mailing lists or posting content to our Site forums.
+The FreeBSD Project allows unlimited distribution of that content.
+Information submitted in those reports and lists, including your Personally Identifiable Information, is considered public and will be accessible to anyone on the web.
+Such information is not only stored on servers belonging to the FreeBSD Foundation, but it is also stored on other servers that mirror the content of our Site.
+The FreeBSD Foundation has no control over the use of that information, including your Personally Identifiable Information.
 
-This website uses a cookie to record layout style preferences for individual users, as well track anonymous traffic data. A cookie is a small text file provided by a web server that may be placed on your computer by your web browser. Cookies cannot be used to run programs or deliver viruses to your computer. Cookies are uniquely assigned to you, and can only be read by a Web server in the domain that issued the cookie to you. You may refuse the use of cookies by selecting the appropriate settings on your browser, however please note that if you do this you may not be able to use the full functionality of this or other websites.
+This website uses a cookie to record layout style preferences for individual users, as well track anonymous traffic data.
+A cookie is a small text file provided by a web server that may be placed on your computer by your web browser.
+Cookies cannot be used to run programs or deliver viruses to your computer.
+Cookies are uniquely assigned to you, and can only be read by a Web server in the domain that issued the cookie to you.
+You may refuse the use of cookies by selecting the appropriate settings on your browser,
+however please note that if you do this you may not be able to use the full functionality of this or other websites.
 
 == How the information collected is used:
 
-The FreeBSD Project takes the privacy of our users and members very seriously. We will never sell, rent, or otherwise provide your personally identifiable information to any third parties except as stated in this document. We will not associate any data gathered from your use of our Site with any personally identifying information.
+The FreeBSD Project takes the privacy of our users and members very seriously.
+We will never sell, rent, or otherwise provide your personally identifiable information to any third parties except as stated in this document.
+We will not associate any data gathered from your use of our Site with any personally identifying information.
 
 The FreeBSD Project will not use or share your personal information in a manner that differs from what is described in this Privacy Policy without your prior consent.
 
 == How your information is protected:
 
-The FreeBSD Project strictly protects the security of the personal information you provide. Personal information we collect is stored in password-controlled servers with limited access, and we carefully protect this information from loss or misuse, and from unauthorized access, disclosure, alteration, or destruction.
+The FreeBSD Project strictly protects the security of the personal information you provide.
+Personal information we collect is stored in password-controlled servers with limited access, and we carefully protect this information from loss or misuse, and from unauthorized access, disclosure, alteration, or destruction.
 
 == When your information may be disclosed:
 
@@ -45,16 +63,25 @@ The FreeBSD Project does not share un-anonymised data with anyone.
 
 == Updates to this privacy policy:
 
-We may occasionally update this Privacy Policy. When we do, we will also revise the "last modified" date at the top of the Privacy Policy. We encourage you to periodically review this Privacy Policy to stay informed about how we are protecting the personal information we collect. Your continued use of the service constitutes your agreement to this Privacy Policy and any updates.
+We may occasionally update this Privacy Policy.
+When we do, we will also revise the "last modified" date at the top of the Privacy Policy.
+We encourage you to periodically review this Privacy Policy to stay informed about how we are protecting the personal information we collect.
+Your continued use of the service constitutes your agreement to this Privacy Policy and any updates.
 
 == Sale of assets:
 
-In the unlikely event that The FreeBSD Project or substantially all of its assets are acquired, your information may be one of the transferred assets.
+In the unlikely event that The FreeBSD Project or substantially all of its assets are acquired,
+your information may be one of the transferred assets.
 
 == Third party links:
 
-In an attempt to provide you with increased value, we may include third party links on our site. These linked sites have separate and independent privacy policies. This Privacy Policy only covers our Site and does not cover any other website. We therefore have no responsibility or liability for the content and activities of these linked sites. Nonetheless, we seek to protect the integrity of our site and welcome any feedback about these linked sites (including if a specific link does not work).
+In an attempt to provide you with increased value, we may include third party links on our site.
+These linked sites have separate and independent privacy policies.
+This Privacy Policy only covers our Site and does not cover any other website.
+We therefore have no responsibility or liability for the content and activities of these linked sites.
+Nonetheless, we seek to protect the integrity of our site and welcome any feedback about these linked sites (including if a specific link does not work).
 
 == Contacting Us:
 
-We would like to receive your comments and questions about this Privacy Policy and any other matter you have regarding our Site. Please address comments or questions to us via e-mail at: privacy@FreeBSD.org.
+We would like to receive your comments and questions about this Privacy Policy and any other matter you have regarding our Site.
+Please address comments or questions to us via e-mail at: privacy@FreeBSD.org.