From nobody Wed Apr 13 17:12:37 2022 X-Original-To: dev-commits-doc-all@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 36B8E1B33875 for ; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:12:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@freebsd.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6074::16:84]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "freefall.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Kdq0Y14DQz52Gv; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:12:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@freebsd.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1649869965; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=eud04DWyyuNJJY2uhMLS9hvpxNKPBTuo/HFRrjhbpJ0=; b=PpM9lb2ddPEqy6kepApIr6LtHuD7/yJbkm8ObvNK17e+mAw9i/BbOr7fjzanyC4+34zQnO pzU9gUKgaPq9rVhrFkN6DfY8xDBBLxEeu46Fh8eJjImjxnY7Kz9o644ZhMYD+DVcDs/gKc Xj721GscHcIVu97/rEahc4a6ck+Abz5eRmLslpyIjqF6symuV57sj2MBD4+0jVYtKCtgf3 z1UVKYyp7NH9aKJyg2jmg2a72VtfKNDww/7kb+azut0If70eHBZY+x6pOrn9SQVWLqnne8 poyStUyao+upD0Kmq/e3iAOMkRtpBeZJS65l9Z0uCNVul7F9iWzV90b839xZwg== Received: from FreeBSD.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6074::16:84]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by freefall.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 9E9C76EE1; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:12:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@freebsd.org) Date: Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:12:37 +0000 From: Glen Barber To: John Baldwin Cc: Mike Karels , doc-committers@freebsd.org, dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: git: c4e48b65b7 - main - 13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative. 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I don= 't know > that we have a definitive style guide for release notes though. >=20 For the past few releases, I have been using "... had been added." I personally have no complaint against using "... has been added." I do not think we have a strict rule on this, one way or the other. 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