svn commit: r285563 - head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes

[Glen Barber]

On Tue, Jul 14, 2015 at 11:01:34PM +0100, Andrew Turner wrote:
> > Modified: head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue
> > Jul 14 20:10:07 2015	(r285562) +++
> > head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue Jul
> > 14 20:10:09 2015	(r285563) @@ -773,9 +773,6 @@ system.</para>
> >        </important>
> >  
> > -      <para revision="277962" arch="powerpc">Support for booting
> > -	relocatable kernels has been added.</para>
> > -
> >        <para revision="279189" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;"
> >  	arch="powerpc">Kernel support for Vector-Scalar eXtension
> >  	(<acronym>VSX</acronym>) found on POWER7 and POWER8 hardware
> > @@ -786,6 +783,10 @@
> >  	&powerpc; processors has been overhaulded to improve
> >  	concurrency.</para>
> >  
> > +      <para revision="282727">Support for booting relocatable kernels
> > +	has been extended to non-<acronym>EFI</acronym>
> > +	systems.</para>
> 
> r282727 is moving the relocation code for the loader to a common place.
> It has nothing to do with making the kernel relocatable, but as a prep
> for r282731.
> 

Do you have a suggested rewording?  I can't think of another way to word
this, since 'Support for [...]' still seems relevant for the context.

Glen

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