svn commit: r285000 - head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes

[Glen Barber]

Author: gjb
Date: Wed Jul  1 10:33:19 2015
New Revision: 285000
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/285000

Log:
  Refine the lockstat(1) entry based on corrections and
  clarifications received during review.
  
  Submitted by:	avg
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Wed Jul  1 10:17:17 2015	(r284999)
+++ head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Wed Jul  1 10:33:19 2015	(r285000)
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Reader locks are now recognized as adaptive and can
+	  <para>Reader locks are now recognized as adaptive that can
 	    spin on &os;.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
@@ -363,8 +363,8 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Spin-and-block events that occur before lock
-	    acquisition are now reported.</para>
+	  <para>Spin and block events are now reported before lock
+	    acquisition events.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>