svn commit: r236595 - head/share/man/man4

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock (doc committer)
Date: Tue Jun  5 02:18:54 2012
New Revision: 236595
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/236595

Log:
  More wording corrections and simplifications.
  
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/vlan.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/vlan.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/vlan.4	Mon Jun  4 22:59:33 2012	(r236594)
+++ head/share/man/man4/vlan.4	Tue Jun  5 02:18:54 2012	(r236595)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd October 25, 2011
+.Dd June 4, 2012
 .Dt VLAN 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 .Nd "IEEE 802.1Q VLAN network interface"
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 To compile this driver into the kernel,
-place the following lines in your
+place the following line in your
 kernel configuration file:
 .Bd -ragged -offset indent
 .Cd "device vlan"
@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@ It may have either capability enabled pe
 a way to turn it off.
 The whole issue is very specific to a particular device and its driver.
 .Pp
-At present, physical interfaces capable of full VLAN processing
-in the hardware is limited to these devices:
+At present, these devices are capable of full VLAN processing
+in hardware:
 .Xr ae 4 ,
 .Xr age 4 ,
 .Xr alc 4 ,
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ for
 use and calculates the appropriate frame MTU based on the
 capabilities of the parent interface.
 Some other interfaces not listed above may handle long frames,
-but they do not advertise this ability of theirs.
+but they do not advertise this ability.
 The MTU setting on
 .Nm
 can be corrected manually if used in conjunction with such a parent interface.