svn commit: r207283 - head/usr.bin/gzip
Ben Kaduk
minimarmot at gmail.com
Tue Apr 27 17:55:54 UTC 2010
On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI <delphij at freebsd.org> wrote:
> Author: delphij
> Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010
> New Revision: 207283
> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283
>
> Log:
> Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read.
>
> Reviewed by: Alexander Best <alexbestms wwu de>
> MFC after: 13 days
>
> Modified:
> head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1
>
> Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 (r207282)
> +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 (r207283)
> @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by
> .An Xin LI Aq delphij at FreeBSD.org .
> .Sh BUGS
> According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bit
> -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than
> -4GB in size. This limitation also applies to
> +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB.
> +This limitation also applies to
Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had
"files that is" instead of "files that are". The new version has a
comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore"
should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop.
I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this
change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility".
-Ben Kaduk
> .Fl l
> option of
> .Nm
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