svn commit: r498823 - head/security/aide

[Cy Schubert]

In message <20190413190847.GA13742 at FreeBSD.org>, Alexey Dokuchaev 
writes:
> On Sat, Apr 13, 2019 at 06:59:47PM +0000, Cy Schubert wrote:
> > New Revision: 498823
> > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/498823
> > 
> > Log:
> >   More accurately reflect what aide is in COMMENT and pkg-descr.
> > 
> > Modified:
> >   head/security/aide/Makefile   (contents, props changed)
> >   head/security/aide/pkg-descr   (contents, props changed)
> > 
> > ...
> > @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ CATEGORIES=	security
> >  MASTER_SITES=	https://github.com/aide/aide/releases/download/v${PORTV
> ERSION}/
> >  
> >  MAINTAINER=	cy at FreeBSD.org
> > -COMMENT=	Replacement and extension for Tripwire
> > +COMMENT=	A file and directory integrity checker
>
> Violation of the PHB paragraph 5.6 -- Do not start [COMMENT] with an
> indefinite article (that is, A or An).

My bad. I'll fix that.

>
> > @@ -1,5 +1,12 @@
> > -AIDE is Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment.
> > -This piece of software was written as a replacement and extension
> > -for Tripwire.
> > +AIDE is Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment.  AIDE
> > +(Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment, [eyd]) is a file and
> > +directory integrity checker.
>
> Why do you have to repeat "Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment" twice
> in the same sentence?

Maybe cut & paste from their website was a bad idea. I'll fix the 
English. Don't tell my wife, a linguist. I'll get it twice in one day. 
Bad enough only here.

The fixes are committed to my git repo. I'll push them soon.


-- 
Cheers,
Cy Schubert <Cy.Schubert at cschubert.com>
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	The need of the many outweighs the greed of the few.