svn commit: r454902 - head/www/firefox-esr

[Greg 'groggy' Lehey]

On Sunday, 26 November 2017 at  5:18:57 +0100, Jan Beich wrote:
> Greg Lehey <grog at FreeBSD.org> writes:
>> @@ -1,13 +1,3 @@
>> -Mozilla Firefox is a free and open source web browser descended from the
>> -Mozilla Application Suite. It is small, fast and easy to use, and offers
>> -many advanced features:
>> +Firefox ESR is an Extended Support Release of firefox.
>
> This is too short and probably better fit for COMMENT instead if you
> deduplicate some words.

Agreed, might be a little short.  I've added more information.  But it
seems inappropriate to describe firefox here, when the port has a more
specific purpose.

>> -WWW: http://www.mozilla.com/firefox
>> +WWW: https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/organizations/faq/
>
> Better drop en-US/ part in case there's non-English version available.

Done.

Feel free to modify if you still don't like what you see.

Greg
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