svn commit: r426822 - head/devel/p5-Async-MergePoint

[Alexey Dokuchaev]

Author: danfe
Date: Tue Nov 22 13:06:47 2016
New Revision: 426822
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/426822

Log:
  Fix a typo, improve wording, reformat for better readability, use double
  space after full stop and single space for WWW: line.

Modified:
  head/devel/p5-Async-MergePoint/pkg-descr

Modified: head/devel/p5-Async-MergePoint/pkg-descr
==============================================================================
--- head/devel/p5-Async-MergePoint/pkg-descr	Tue Nov 22 12:59:03 2016	(r426821)
+++ head/devel/p5-Async-MergePoint/pkg-descr	Tue Nov 22 13:06:47 2016	(r426822)
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 Often in program logic, multiple different steps need to be taken that
 are independent of each other, but their total result is needed before
-the next step can be taken. In synchonous code, the usual approach is
-to do them sequentially.
+the next step can be taken.  In synchronous code, the usual approach is
+to perform them sequentially.
 
 An asynchronous or event-based program could do this, but if each step
-involves some IO idle time, better overall performance can often be
-gained by running the steps in parallel. A Async::MergePoint object
-can then be used to wait for all of the steps to complete, before
-passing the combined result of each step on to the next stage.
+involves some I/O idle time, better overall performance can often be
+gained by running the steps in parallel.  Async::MergePoint object can
+then be used to wait for all of the steps to complete, before passing
+the combined result of each step on to the next stage.
 
 This module was originally part of the IO::Async distribution, but was
-removed under the inspiration of Pedro Melo's Async::Hooks
-distribution, because it doesn't itself contain anything IO-specific.
+removed under the inspiration of Pedro Melo's Async::Hooks distribution,
+because it does not itself contain anything I/O-specific.
 
-WWW:    http://search.cpan.org/dist/Async-MergePoint/
+WWW: http://search.cpan.org/dist/Async-MergePoint/