svn commit: r42807 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs

[Benjamin Kaduk]

On Wed, 2 Oct 2013, Benedict Reuschling wrote:

> Author: bcr
> Date: Wed Oct  2 17:53:48 2013
> New Revision: 42807
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42807
>
> Log:
>  Add basic information about ZFS delegation and small corrections to other
>  parts.
>
>  Submitted by:	Allan Jude
>
> Modified:
>  projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Wed Oct  2 16:19:37 2013	(r42806)
> +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Wed Oct  2 17:53:48 2013	(r42807)
>       <para>A volume can be formatted with any filesystem on top of
> -	it. This will appear to the user as if they are working with
> -	that specific filesystem and not ZFS.  This way, it can be
> -	used to augment non-ZFS filesystems with ZFS features that
> -	they do not have.  For example, combining the ZFS compression
> -	property together with a 250 MB volume allows to create a
> -	compressed FAT filesystem.</para>
> +	it.  This will appear to the user as if they are working with
> +	a regular disk using that specific filesystem and not ZFS.
> +	In this way, non-ZFS file systems can be augmented with
> +	ZFS features that they would not normally have.  For example,
> +	combining the ZFS compression property together with a
> +	250 MB volume allows to create a compressed FAT
> +	filesystem.</para>

This last sentence seems to be incorrect grammar, as the verb "allows" 
requires a direct object, as in "allows the user to create".  It's 
probably better to just rewrite it as "allows creation of", though.

-Ben