svn commit: r43163 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security

Benedict Reuschling bcr at FreeBSD.org
Mon Nov 11 09:21:06 UTC 2013


Author: bcr
Date: Mon Nov 11 09:21:05 2013
New Revision: 43163
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43163

Log:
  Make the security charter wording less gender biased.
  
  Submitted by:	Kubilay Kocak
  Approved by:	des

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/charter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/charter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/charter.xml	Mon Nov 11 06:54:40 2013	(r43162)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/charter.xml	Mon Nov 11 09:21:05 2013	(r43163)
@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@
 
     <li>Veto: The Security Officer has the final say in security
       matters, and may request the back-out of any commits or
-      elimination of any subsystems that he considers detrimental
+      elimination of any subsystems that they consider detrimental
       to the security of FreeBSD.</li>
 
     <li>Team: The Security Officer may maintain a Security Officer Team
-      and delegate these powers and responsibilities at his discretion.
+      and delegate these powers and responsibilities at their discretion.
       Membership is selected by the Security Officer, but always
       includes emeritus security officers --- just when they thought
       they had paid their dues.</li>
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
   <p>The Security Officer Team members are selected by the Security
     Officer, and they are accountable to the Security Officer and to the
     Core Team.  Security Officer Team members are expected to assist the
-    Security Officer in fulfilling his responsibilities and otherwise
+    Security Officer in fulfilling their responsibilities and otherwise
     participate in protecting the FreeBSD user community.</p>
 
   </body>


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