svn commit: r40331 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Mon Dec 10 15:31:19 2012
New Revision: 40331
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40331

Log:
  Make some language in running-X nicer and more professional.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Mon Dec 10 15:31:17 2012	(r40330)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Mon Dec 10 15:31:19 2012	(r40331)
@@ -6002,10 +6002,10 @@ options    SYSVMSG          # enable for
 	    requires write access to &man.io.4;.  For more information,
 	    see at the &man.init.8; manual page.</para>
 
-	  <para>So the question is what else you should do instead, and
-	    you basically have two choices: set your
+	  <para>There are two solutions to the problem:
+	    Set your
 	    <literal>securelevel</literal> back down to zero (usually
-	    from <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>), or run &man.xdm.1;
+	    in <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>), or run &man.xdm.1;
 	    at boot time (before the <literal>securelevel</literal> is
 	    raised).</para>