svn commit: r45641 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security

[Benjamin Kaduk]

Author: bjk
Date: Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014
New Revision: 45641
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45641

Log:
  Massage some igor fixes to improve grammar and readability
  
  Approved by:	hrs (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml	Fri Sep 19 00:14:10 2014	(r45640)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml	Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014	(r45641)
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
 </vuln></programlisting>
 
       <para>The tag names are supposed to be self-explanatory so we
-	shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be fill
+	shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be filled
 	in:</para>
 
       <calloutlist>
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
 	    <literal><le></literal>,
 	    <literal><eq></literal>,
 	    <literal><ge></literal>, and
-	    <literal><gt></literal> elements.  Check the version
+	    <literal><gt></literal> elements.  Check that the version
 	    ranges given do not overlap.</para>
 
 	  <para>In a range specification, <literal>*</literal>
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@
     <sect2 xml:id="security-notify-vuxml-testing">
       <title>Testing Changes to the VuXML Database</title>
 
-      <para>Assume a new entry for a
+      <para>This example describes a new entry for a
 	vulnerability in the package <literal>clamav</literal> that
 	has been fixed in version <literal>0.65_7</literal>.</para>
 
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@
       <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>packaudit</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>To verify that the <literal><affected></literal>
-	section of the entry will match correct package(s), issue this
+	section of the entry will match the correct package(s), issue this
 	command:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>portaudit -f /usr/ports/INDEX -r <replaceable>uuid</replaceable></userinput></screen>