svn commit: r45294 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jul 14 21:40:51 UTC 2014
Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 14 21:40:50 2014
New Revision: 45294
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45294
Log:
Reintroduce intentional informality in the last Python task. Other
assorted fixes in the rest of the document, including spelling and
titles.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml Mon Jul 14 18:14:52 2014 (r45293)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml Mon Jul 14 21:40:50 2014 (r45294)
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
</project>
<project cat='proj'>
- <title>RPC/NFS and CTL/iSCSI performance optimizations.</title>
+ <title>RPC/NFS and CTL/iSCSI Performance Optimizations</title>
<contact>
<person>
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
</links>
<body>
- <p>The <tt>vt(4)</tt> (a.k.a. <tt>Newcons</tt>) project provides
+ <p>The <tt>vt(4)</tt> (aka <tt>Newcons</tt>) project provides
a replacement for the legacy <tt>syscons</tt> system console.
It brings a number of improvements, including better
integration with graphics modes and broader character set
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@
</project>
<project cat='proj'>
- <title>QEMU bsd-user enabled ports building</title>
+ <title>QEMU <tt>bsd-user</tt>-Enabled Ports Building</title>
<contact>
<person>
@@ -562,8 +562,8 @@
<task>More tasks can be found on the team's wiki page (see
links).</task>
- <task>To get involved, interested people can say hello on IRC
- and let us know their areas of interest!</task>
+ <task>To get involved, come and say "hi" on IRC and let us know
+ what you are interested in!</task>
</help>
</project>
@@ -661,26 +661,26 @@
<p>In May, a new release policy was published as well as being
presented at the BSDCan developer conference by John Baldwin.
- The idea is that each major release branch (eg. 10.x) is
- guarranteed to be supported for at least five years, but
- individual point releases on each branch (eg. 10.0-RELEASE)
+ The idea is that each major release branch (for example, 10.X) is
+ guaranteed to be supported for at least five years, but
+ individual point releases on each branch, like 10.0-RELEASE,
will be issued at regular intervals and only the latest point
release will be supported.</p>
<p>Another significant change did not receive approval. When
the change to the Bylaws reforming the core team election
- process was put to the vote of all &os; developers it failed
+ process was put to the vote of all &os; developers, it failed
to reach a quorum.</p>
<p>June saw the culmination of a long running project to replace
- the project's bug tracking system. As of 3rd June the &os;
+ the project's bug tracking system. As of June 3, the &os;
project has switched to Bugzilla as its bug tracking system.
- All of the history of Gnats PRs has been preserved, so there
+ All of the history of GNATS PRs has been preserved, so there
is no need to re-open old tickets. Work is still going on to
replicate some of the integration tweaks that had been applied
- to Gnats, but all necessary functionality has been implemented
+ to GNATS, but all necessary functionality has been implemented
and the project is already seeing the benefits of the new
- capabilities bought by Bugzilla.</p>
+ capabilities brought by Bugzilla.</p>
<p>An election to select core members for the next two year term
of office took place during this period. We would like to
@@ -688,7 +688,7 @@
The new core team provides continuity with previous core
teams: about half are incumbents from the previous team, and
several former core team members have returned after a hiatus.
- core now includes two members of the &os; Foundation board and
+ Core now includes two members of the &os; Foundation board and
one other Foundation staff member, aiding greater coordination
at the top level of the project. At the same time the
core-secretary role was passed on to a new volunteer.</p>
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@
</project>
<project cat='misc'>
- <title>&os; host support for OpenStack and OpenContrail.</title>
+ <title>&os; Host Support for OpenStack and OpenContrail</title>
<contact>
<person>
@@ -909,7 +909,7 @@
</project>
<project cat='kern'>
- <title>SDIO driver</title>
+ <title>SDIO Driver</title>
<contact>
<person>
@@ -945,8 +945,8 @@
<p>WiFi driver is able to load a firmware onto the card and
initialize it. A rewrite of the MMC stack as a transport
- layer for CAM framework is in progress. This will allow to
- utilize the well-tested CAM locking model and debug features.</p>
+ layer for CAM framework is in progress. This will allow
+ utilization of the well-tested CAM locking model and debug features.</p>
</body>
<help>
@@ -1016,8 +1016,8 @@
</project>
<project cat='kern'>
- <title>Running &os; as an application on top of Fiasco.OC
- microkernel</title>
+ <title>Running &os; as an Application on Top of the Fiasco.OC
+ Microkernel</title>
<contact>
<person>
@@ -1042,13 +1042,13 @@
provides a bare minimum of services to the applications
running on top of it, unlike traditional kernels that
incorporate a complex code like IP stacks and device drivers.
- This allows to dramatically decrease the amount of code
+ This allows a dramatic decrease in the amount of code
running in the privileged mode of the CPU, achieving higher
security while still providing an acceptable level of
performance.</p>
<p>Running an operating system kernel on top of the microkernel
- allows to leverage any software that was developed for that
+ allows leveraging any software that was developed for that
operating system. The OS kernel runs in user-mode side-by-side
with other microkernel applications such as real-time
components. Multiple OSes, each with their userland
@@ -1059,7 +1059,7 @@
<p>The project aims to create a port of &os; to Fiasco.OC
microkernel, which is a high performance L4 microkernel
developed by TU Dresden. The existing ports of OpenBSD and
- Linux are used as a reference. This will allow to use the
+ Linux are used as a reference. This will allow the use of
unique &os; features like ZFS in L4-based projects.</p>
</body>
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