svn commit: r38983 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 UTC 2012
Author: bcr
Date: Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 2012
New Revision: 38983
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38983
Log:
Fix a comma splice by making two separate (shorter) sentences out of
a long one.
Submitted by: bjk
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Mon Jun 4 16:08:25 2012 (r38982)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 2012 (r38983)
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 n
<para>System logging is an important aspect of system
administration. It is used both to detect hardware and software
- issues and errors in the system, it also plays a very
+ issues and errors in the system. It also plays a very
important role in security auditing and incident response.
System daemons without a controlling terminal also usually log
information to a system logging facility or other log
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