PERFORCE change 178306 for review

Rene Ladan rene at FreeBSD.org
Sun May 16 00:16:27 UTC 2010 

http://p4web.freebsd.org/@@178306?ac=10

Change 178306 by rene at rene_eee on 2010/05/16 00:16:12

	IFC

Affected files ...

.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml#16 integrate
.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml#16 integrate
.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/mailing-lists.ent#13 integrate
.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml#47 integrate
.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/share/sgml/usergroups.xml#13 integrate

Differences ...

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml#16 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml,v 1.200 2010/02/04 03:41:31 tabthorpe Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml,v 1.201 2010/05/14 14:32:29 brd Exp $
 -->
 
 <appendix id="eresources">
@@ -519,6 +519,11 @@
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
+	      <entry>&a.sysinstall.name;</entry>
+	      <entry>&man.sysinstall.8; development</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
 	      <entry>&a.threads.name;</entry>
 	      <entry>Threading in FreeBSD</entry>
 	    </row>

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml#16 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml,v 1.120 2010/03/12 19:40:56 manolis Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml,v 1.121 2010/05/14 15:28:53 brueffer Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="network-servers">
@@ -3127,8 +3127,8 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Reasons to Run a Name Server</title>
 
-      <para>Name servers usually come in two forms: an authoritative
-	name server, and a caching name server.</para>
+      <para>Name servers generally come in two forms: authoritative
+	name servers, and caching name servers.</para>
 
       <para>An authoritative name server is needed when:</para>
 
@@ -3173,8 +3173,8 @@
 	retrieves the reply.  With a local, caching
 	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server, the query only has to be made
 	once to the outside world by the caching <acronym>DNS</acronym>
-	server.  Every additional query will not have to look to the
-	outside of the local network, since the information is cached
+	server.  Additional queries will not have to go
+	outside the local network, since the information is cached
 	locally.</para>
     </sect2>
 
@@ -3234,7 +3234,7 @@
 	<secondary>starting</secondary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para>Since BIND is installed by default, configuring it all is
+      <para>Since BIND is installed by default, configuring it is
 	relatively simple.</para>
 
       <para>The default <application>named</application> configuration
@@ -3805,7 +3805,7 @@
         <para>The MX record indicates which mail
           servers are responsible for handling incoming mail for the
           zone.  <hostid role="fqdn">mail.example.org</hostid> is the
-          hostname of the mail server, and 10 being the priority of
+          hostname of a mail server, and 10 is the priority of
           that mail server.</para>
 
         <para>One can have several mail servers, with priorities of 10,
@@ -3838,7 +3838,7 @@
 5       IN      PTR     mail.example.org.</programlisting>
 
         <para>This file gives the proper IP address to hostname
-          mappings of our above fictitious domain.</para>
+          mappings for the above fictitious domain.</para>
 
 	<para>It is worth noting that all names on the right side
 	  of a PTR record need to be fully qualified (i.e., end in
@@ -3879,8 +3879,8 @@
 
       <tip>
 	<para>If a problem arises, keeping sources up to date and
-	  having a fresh build of <application>named</application> would
-	  not hurt.</para>
+	  having a fresh build of <application>named</application>
+	  may help.</para>
       </tip>
     </sect2>
 

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/mailing-lists.ent#13 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      Names of FreeBSD mailing lists and related software.
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/mailing-lists.ent,v 1.69 2010/02/04 03:41:31 tabthorpe Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/mailing-lists.ent,v 1.70 2010/05/14 14:32:29 brd Exp $
 -->
 
 <!ENTITY a.mailman.listinfo "http://lists.FreeBSD.org/mailman/listinfo">
@@ -455,6 +455,10 @@
 <!ENTITY a.svn-src-vendor "<ulink url='&a.svn-src-vendor.url;'>SVN commit messages for the vendor work area tree</ulink>">
 <!ENTITY a.svn-src-vendor.name "<ulink url='&a.svn-src-vendor.url;'>svn-src-vendor</ulink>">
 
+<!ENTITY a.sysinstall.url "&a.mailman.listinfo;/freebsd-sysinstall">
+<!ENTITY a.sysinstall "<ulink url='&a.sysinstall.url;'>Sysinstall development mailing list</ulink>">
+<!ENTITY a.sysinstall.name "<ulink url='&a.sysinstall.url;'>freebsd-sysinstall</ulink>">
+
 <!ENTITY a.test.url "&a.mailman.listinfo;/freebsd-test">
 <!ENTITY a.test "<ulink url='&a.test.url;'>FreeBSD test mailing list</ulink>">
 <!ENTITY a.test.name "<ulink url='&a.test.url;'>freebsd-test</ulink>">

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml#47 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Dutch Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v 1.20 2010/05/05 21:41:52 rene Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v 1.21 2010/05/13 19:32:31 rene Exp $
 
      %SOURCE%  en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
      %SRCID%   1.430

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/share/sgml/usergroups.xml#13 (text+ko) ====

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <usergroups>
   <cvs:keywords xmlns:cvs="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/CVS" version="1.0">
     <cvs:keyword name="freebsd">
-      $FreeBSD: www/share/sgml/usergroups.xml,v 1.91 2010/04/14 19:50:30 jkois Exp $
+      $FreeBSD: www/share/sgml/usergroups.xml,v 1.92 2010/05/13 17:11:40 brueffer Exp $
     </cvs:keyword>
   </cvs:keywords>
 
@@ -852,6 +852,19 @@
     </description>
   </entry>
 
+  <entry id="norcalfulua">
+    <name>Northern California Free Unix &amp; Linux Users Association</name>
+    <url>http://norcalfulua.ning.com/</url>
+    <description>Northern California Free Unix &amp; Linux Users Association's
+      (NORCALFULUA) goal is to assist members with Unix-Like Operating Systems
+      and spreading their use around the Northern California Region.
+      For more information on how to assist in this endeavor please visit the
+      <a href="http://norcalfulua.ning.com">Northern California Free Unix &amp;
+      Linux Users Association</a> website or contact us by
+      <a href="mailto:norcalfulua at gmail.com">email</a>.
+    </description>
+  </entry>
+
   </country>
 
   <country code="CA" name="Canada">

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