PERFORCE change 177784 for review

[Rene Ladan]

http://p4web.freebsd.org/@@177784?ac=10

Change 177784 by rene at rene_acer on 2010/05/05 21:15:30

	IFC

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.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml#21 integrate

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==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml#21 (text+ko) ====

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v 1.428 2010/03/28 18:38:58 pgj Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v 1.429 2010/05/05 19:48:35 blackend Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="advanced-networking">
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@
       <sect3>
 	<title>Kernel Configuration</title>
 
-	<para>To use wireless networking you need a wireless
+	<para>To use wireless networking, you need a wireless
 	  networking card and to configure the kernel with the
 	  appropriate wireless networking support.  The latter is
 	  separated into multiple modules so that you only need to
@@ -803,13 +803,13 @@
 	<programlisting>if_ath_load="YES"</programlisting>
 
 	<para>The Atheros driver is split up into three separate
-	  pieces: the driver proper (&man.ath.4;), the hardware
+	  pieces: the proper driver (&man.ath.4;), the hardware
 	  support layer that handles chip-specific functions
 	  (&man.ath.hal.4;), and an algorithm for selecting which of
 	  several possible rates for transmitting frames
-	  (ath_rate_sample here).  When you load this support as
-	  modules these dependencies are automatically handled for
-	  you.  If instead of an Atheros device you had another device
+	  (ath_rate_sample here).  When this support is loaded as kernel
+	  modules, these dependencies are automatically handled for
+	  you.  If, instead of an Atheros device, you had another device
 	  you would select the module for that device; e.g.:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>if_wi_load="YES"</programlisting>
@@ -852,7 +852,7 @@
 	  base &man.wlan.4; driver which is dynamically loaded with
 	  the adapter driver.</para>
 
-	<para>With that you will need the modules
+	<para>With that, you will need the modules
 	  that implement cryptographic support for the security
 	  protocols you intend to use.  These are intended to be
 	  dynamically loaded on demand by the &man.wlan.4; module but
@@ -861,8 +861,8 @@
 	  and &man.wlan.tkip.4;.  Both &man.wlan.ccmp.4; and
 	  &man.wlan.tkip.4; drivers are only needed if you intend to
 	  use the WPA and/or 802.11i security protocols.  If your
-	  network is to run totally open (i.e., with no encryption)
-	  then you do not even need the &man.wlan.wep.4; support.  To
+	  network does not use encryption,
+	  you will not need &man.wlan.wep.4; support.  To
 	  load these modules at boot time, add the following lines to
 	  <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
 
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@
 	  configuration file (i.e.,
 	  <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>), you have to reboot
 	  your &os; box.  If you do not want to reboot your machine
-	  for the moment, you can just load the modules by hand using
+	  for the moment, you can load the modules by hand using
 	  &man.kldload.8;.</para>
 
 	<note>
@@ -959,8 +959,8 @@
 
 	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>ath0</replaceable> up scan</userinput></screen>
 
-	    <para>In the rest of this document, the &os;&nbsp;7.X user
-	      will have to change the command and configuration lines
+	    <para>In the rest of this document, &os;&nbsp;7.X users
+	      will need to change the command and configuration lines
 	      according to that scheme.</para>
 	  </note>