PERFORCE change 91081 for review

Christian Brueffer brueffer at FreeBSD.org
Sat Feb 4 09:02:04 PST 2006


http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=91081

Change 91081 by brueffer at brueffer_serenity on 2006/02/04 17:01:41

	Various spelling and formatting fixes.

Affected files ...

.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit.log.5#8 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_control.5#6 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_event.5#6 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/auditon.2#7 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getaudit.2#5 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getauid.2#5 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setaudit.2#5 edit
.. //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setauid.2#5 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit.log.5#8 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit.log.5#7 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit.log.5#8 $
 .\"
 .Dd May 1, 2005
 .Dt AUDIT.LOG 5
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
 token contains an IP packet header in network byte order.
 An
 .Dv ip
-token can be cread using
+token can be created using
 .Xr au_to_ip 3 .
 .Bl -column -offset ind ".Sy Field Name Width XX" ".Sy XX Bytes XXXX" ".Sy Description"
 .It Sy "Field" Ta Sy Bytes Ta Sy Description
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
 A
 .Dv path
 token can be created using
-.Xr auto_path 3 .
+.Xr au_to_path 3 .
 .Bl -column -offset ind ".Sy Field Name Width XX" ".Sy XX Bytes XXXX" ".Sy Description"
 .It Sy "Field" Ta Sy Bytes Ta Sy Description
 .It Li "Token ID" Ta "1 byte" Ta "Token ID"
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
 token contains a set of nul-terminated path names.
 The
 .Xr libbsm 3
-API cannot currently create an
+API cannot currently create a
 .Dv path_attr
 token.
 .Bl -column -offset ind ".Sy Field Name Width XX" ".Sy XX Bytes XXXX" ".Sy Description"
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
 This includes both the traditional
 .Ux
 security properties, such as user IDs and group IDs, but also audit
-information such as the audit user ID and sesion.
+information such as the audit user ID and session.
 A
 .Dv process
 token can be created using
@@ -310,12 +310,12 @@
 .Dv process
 token, with the addition of a machine address type and variable length
 address storage capable of containing IPv6 addresses.
-A
+An
 .Dv expanded process
 token can be created using
 .Xr au_to_process32_ex 3
 or
-.Xr au_to_process64 3 .
+.Xr au_to_process64_ex 3 .
 .Bl -column -offset ind ".Sy Field Name Width XX" ".Sy XX Bytes XXXX" ".Sy Description"
 .It Sy "Field" Ta Sy Bytes Ta Sy Description
 .It Li "Token ID" Ta "1 byte" Ta "Token ID"
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
 .Dv subject
 token, with the addition of type/length and variable size machine address
 information in the terminal ID.
-A
+An
 .Dv expanded subject
 token can be created using
 .Xr au_to_subject32_ex 3
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@
 .Bl -column -offset ind ".Sy Field Name Width XX" ".Sy XX Bytes XXXX" ".Sy Description"
 .It Sy "Field" Ta Sy Bytes Ta Sy Description
 .It Li "Token ID" Ta "1 byte" Ta "Token ID"
-.It Li "object ID type" Ta "1 byte" Ta "Object ID"
+.It Li "Object ID type" Ta "1 byte" Ta "Object ID"
 .It Li "Object ID" Ta "4 bytes" Ta "Object ID"
 .El
 .Ss Text Token
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
 .Dv path
 tokens may also be present in an audit record indicating which path, if any,
 was used to reach the object.
-A
+An
 .Dv attribute
 token can be created using
 .Xr au_to_attr32 3
@@ -593,8 +593,8 @@
 .It Li XXXXX
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr audit 8,
-.Xr libbsm 3
+.Xr libbsm 3 ,
+.Xr audit 8
 .Sh AUTHORS
 The Basic Security Module (BSM) interface to audit records and audit event
 stream format were defined by Sun Microsystems.

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_control.5#6 (text+ko) ====

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\" IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_control.5#5 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_control.5#6 $
 .\"
 .Dd Jan 24, 2004
 .Dt AUDIT_CONTROL 5
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 Not currently used as the value of 20 percent is chosen by the kernel.
 .El
 .Sh AUDIT FLAGS
-Audit flags are a comma delimited list of audit classes as defined in the
+Audit flags are a comma-delimited list of audit classes as defined in the
 audit_class file.
 See
 .Xr audit_class 5
@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@
 .It ^
 Record both successful and failed events
 .It ^+
-Don't record successful events
+Do not record successful events
 .It ^-
-Don't record failed events
+Do not record failed events
 .El
 .Sh DEFAULT
 The following settings appear in the default
@@ -104,9 +104,9 @@
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr audit 1 ,
-.Xr auditd 8 ,
 .Xr audit_class 5 ,
-.Xr audit_user 5
+.Xr audit_user 5 ,
+.Xr auditd 8
 .Sh AUTHORS
 This software was created by McAfee Research, the security research division
 of McAfee, Inc., under contract to Apple Computer Inc.

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_event.5#6 (text+ko) ====

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\" IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_event.5#5 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/audit_event.5#6 $
 .\"
 .Dd Jan 24, 2004
 .Dt AUDIT_EVENT 5
@@ -42,7 +42,9 @@
 .Dl eventnum:eventname:description:eventclass .
 Each
 .Vt eventclass
-should have a corresponding entry in the audit_class file.
+should have a corresponding entry in the
+.Pa audit_class
+file.
 See 
 .Xr audit_class 5
 for details.

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/auditon.2#7 (text+ko) ====

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/auditon.2#6 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/auditon.2#7 $
 .\"
 .Dd April 19, 2005
 .Dt AUDITON 2
@@ -53,8 +53,9 @@
 .It Dv A_SETPOLICY
 Set audit policy flags.
 .Ft *data
-must point to an long value set to one of the audit 
-policy control values defined in audit.h.
+must point to a long value set to one of the audit 
+policy control values defined in
+.Pa audit.h .
 Currently, only
 .Dv AUDIT_CNT
 and
@@ -83,7 +84,7 @@
 .It Dv A_SETQCTRL
 Set kernel audit queue parameters.
 .Ft *data
-must point to a 
+must point to a
 .Ft au_qctrl_t
 structure containing the
 kernel audit queue control settings:
@@ -106,7 +107,7 @@
 .It Dv A_SETCOND
 Set the current auditing condition.
 .Ft *data
-must point to an long value containing the new
+must point to a long value containing the new
 audit condition, one of
 .Dv AUC_AUDITING ,
 .Dv AUC_NOAUDIT ,
@@ -115,13 +116,13 @@
 .It Dv A_SETCLASS
 Set the event class preselection mask for an audit event.
 .Ft *data
-must point to a 
+must point to a
 .Ft au_evclass_map_t
 structure containing the audit event and mask.
 .It Dv A_SETPMASK
 Set the preselection masks for a process.
 .Ft *data
-must point to a 
+must point to a
 .Ft auditpinfo_t
 structure that contains the given process's audit 
 preselection masks for both success and failure.
@@ -167,7 +168,7 @@
 .It Dv A_GETPOLICY
 Return the current audit policy setting.
 .Ft *data
-must point to an long value which will be set to
+must point to a long value which will be set to
 one of the current audit policy flags.
 Currently, only
 .Dv AUDIT_CNT
@@ -188,8 +189,8 @@
 .Ft au_fstat_t
 structure. The
 .Ft af_filesz
-field will set to the maximum audit log file size. A value of 0
-indicates no limit to the size.
+field will be set to the maximum audit log file size.
+A value of 0 indicates no limit to the size.
 The
 .Ft af_filesz
 will be set to the current audit log file size.
@@ -227,7 +228,9 @@
 .Dv AUDIT_TRIGGER_OPEN_NEW
 (open a new audit log file),
 .Dv AUDIT_TRIGGER_READ_FILE
-(read the audit_control file),
+(read the
+.Pa audit_control
+file),
 .Dv AUDIT_TRIGGER_CLOSE_AND_DIE
 (close the current log file and exit),
 or

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getaudit.2#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getaudit.2#4 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getaudit.2#5 $
 .\"
 .Dd April 19, 2005
 .Dt GETAUDIT 2
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 and
 .Va length .
 .Pp
-This system call required appropriate privilege to complete.
+This system call requires appropriate privilege to complete.
 .Sh RETURN VALUES
 .Nm
 returns 0 on success, or returns -1 on failure, providing additional error

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getauid.2#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getauid.2#4 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/getauid.2#5 $
 .\"
 .Dd April 19, 2005
 .Dt GETAUID 2
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 pointed to by
 .Va auid .
 .Pp
-This system call required appropriate privilege to complete.
+This system call requires appropriate privilege to complete.
 .Sh RETURN VALUES
 .Nm
 returns 0 on success, or returns -1 on failure, providing additional error

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setaudit.2#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setaudit.2#4 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setaudit.2#5 $
 .\"
 .Dd April 19, 2005
 .Dt SETAUDIT 2
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 and
 .Va length .
 .Pp
-This system call required appropriate privilege to complete.
+This system call requires appropriate privilege to complete.
 .Sh RETURN VALUES
 .Nm
 returns 0 on success, or returns -1 on failure, providing additional error

==== //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setauid.2#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setauid.2#4 $
+.\" $P4: //depot/projects/trustedbsd/openbsm/man/setauid.2#5 $
 .\"
 .Dd April 19, 2005
 .Dt SETAUID 2
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 pointed to by
 .Va auid .
 .Pp
-This system call required appropriate privilege to complete.
+This system call requires appropriate privilege to complete.
 .Sh RETURN VALUES
 .Nm
 returns 0 on success, or returns -1 on failure, providing additional error


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