www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article

[Ceri Davies]

The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Ceri Davies <ceri at submonkey.net>
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida at freebsd.org>
Cc: freebsd-www at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article
Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100

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 On Sun, Jul 03, 2005 at 10:30:20PM +0000, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
 > The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS.
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 > From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida at freebsd.org>
 > To: Daniel Gerzo <danger at rulez.sk>
 > Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at freebsd.org
 > Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops arti=
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 > Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300
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 >  On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo <danger at rulez.sk> wrote:
 >  > --- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
 >  > --- article.sgml.orig	Sun Jul  3 16:59:50 2005
 >  > +++ article.sgml	Sun Jul  3 18:58:39 2005
 >  > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@
 >  >        <ulink url=3D"http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &=
 os;
 >  >        Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para>
 >  > =20
 >  > -    <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out
 >  > -      the &a.mobile.name; list.</para>
 >  > +    <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users,
 >  > +      checkout the &a.mobile.name; list.  You can also get additional
 >  > +      information about using Laptops on &os; at
 >  > +      <ulink url=3D"http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html">
 >  > +	http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para>
 > =20
 >  Nice diff.  I only have a minor comment.  When the content of a <ulink>
 >  element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the
 >  content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of
 >  duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.:
 > =20
 >  	<ulink url=3D"http://example.net/"></ulink>
 > =20
 >  This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to
 >  a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the
 >  other).
 > =20
 >  If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with
 >  this minor change to the diff :-)
 
 I'm happy with this, although "check out" is more correct than
 "checkout".
 
 Ceri
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 Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
 not sure about the former.			  -- Einstein (attrib.)
 
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