www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article
Daniel Gerzo
danger at rulez.sk
Sun Jul 3 17:10:10 GMT 2005
>Number: 82935
>Category: www
>Synopsis: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-www
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 03 17:10:09 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Daniel Gerzo
>Release: FreeBSD 5.4 i386
>Organization:
rulez.sk
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD daemon.rulez.sk #2: Fri May 27 23:16:31 CEST 2005 danger at daemon.rulez.sk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/daemon i386
>Description:
The doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml doesn't use proper
english. I have also included little update for this article.
>How-To-Repeat:
check out:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.html
>Fix:
--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005
+++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005
@@ -45,8 +45,11 @@
<ulink url="http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &os;
Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para>
- <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out
- the &a.mobile.name; list.</para>
+ <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users,
+ checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional
+ information about using Laptops on &os; at
+ <ulink url="http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html">
+ http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para>
<sect1>
<title>&xorg;</title>
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
More information about the freebsd-www
mailing list