--- chapter.sgml	2008-10-31 08:23:35.000000000 -0400
+++ newchapter.sgml	2008-11-02 17:21:54.000000000 -0500
@@ -862,6 +862,7 @@
 
     <example>
       <title>Erroneous SGML comments</title>
+		<para> The SGML parser will treat </para>
 
       <programlisting><![ CDATA [
 <!-- This is in the comment --
@@ -870,22 +871,21 @@
 
   -- back inside the comment -->]]></programlisting>
 
-      <para>The SGML parser will treat this as though it were actually:</para>
+      <para>as though it were actually:</para>
 
       <programlisting>&lt;!THIS IS OUTSIDE THE COMMENT&gt;</programlisting>
 
       <para>This is not valid SGML, and may give confusing error
 	messages.</para>
 
+      <para>Because "--" delimitates the end of a comment do <emphasis>do not</emphasis> write comments like this: </para>
+
       <programlisting><![ CDATA [<!--------------- This is a very bad idea --------------->]]></programlisting>
 
-      <para>As the example suggests, <emphasis>do not</emphasis> write
-	comments like that.</para>
+	<para>This is a (slightly) better approach, but it still potentially confusing to people new to SGML:</para>
 
       <programlisting><![ CDATA [<!--===================================================-->]]></programlisting>
 
-      <para>That is a (slightly) better approach, but it still potentially
-	confusing to people new to SGML.</para>
     </example>
 
     <sect2>
