CfR: config chapter changes
wblock at wonkity.com
Thu Feb 16 03:24:55 UTC 2012
On Wed, 15 Feb 2012, Glen Barber wrote:
>> <para>User crontabs allow individual users to schedule tasks without the
>> @@ -487,10 +487,11 @@
>> permissions of the user who owns the crontab.</para>
>> <para>The <username>root</username> user can have a user
>> crontab just like
>> - any other user. This one is different from
>> - <filename>/etc/crontab</filename> (the system crontab). Because of the
>> - system crontab, there is usually no need to create a user crontab
>> - for <username>root</username>.</para>
>> + any other user. The <username>root</username> user crontab is
>> + distinct from <filename>/etc/crontab</filename> (the system crontab).
> I don't understand this sentence. "Distinct" why/how? Maybe it would
> be better to just say "separate" here.
Distinct was my word, trying to point out that /etc/crontab is *not*
>> @@ -1944,7 +1942,7 @@
>> out of space and the update to fail.</para>
>> - <title>More Details about Soft Updates</title>
>> + <title>More Details About Soft Updates</title>
> I'm not sure this "about" should be capitalized. I may be wrong, but I
> do not believe prepositions should be capitalized in titles like this
> unless they are the first word of the title.
Or, in AP style, if they are longer than four letters.
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