CfR: config chapter changes
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Wed Feb 15 03:55:37 UTC 2012
On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 10:46 PM, Doug Barton <dougb at freebsd.org> wrote:
> On 02/14/2012 19:36, Eitan Adler wrote:
>> What about the following?
> For my taste it's still a little too wordy .... In looking this over I
> have some ideas, but can't really put work into it right atm, is
> updating this urgent? If not, what's your time frame?
I'd like to commit some changes in the next week or so and would be
happy to continue making improvements in the future.
On the other hand this isn't urgent by any sense of the word.
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