docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article

Jason Helfman jhelfman at e-e.com
Mon Feb 14 19:10:09 UTC 2011


The following reply was made to PR docs/154766; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman at e-e.com>
To: Sahil Tandon <sahil at FreeBSD.org>
Cc: bug-followup at freebsd.org, doc at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 10:59:52 -0800

 Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix.
 
 Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.1
 diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
 --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000	1.1
 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000
 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
   	url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
         is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
         For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
 -      against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
 +      against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
         help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
         &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
         updates for a number of machines.</para>
 @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
         It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
   
       <para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
 -      be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
 +      be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
   
       <programlisting>
   
 @@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
   	<para>Adding <option>-j <replaceable>NUMBER</replaceable></option>
   	  flags to <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> and
   	  <maketarget>obj</maketarget> targets in the
 -	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script, may speed up
 +	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script may speed up
   	  processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not
   	  necessary.  Using these flags in other targets is not
   	  recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable.</para>
 
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