PXE Booting with an NFS root file system

Craig Rodrigues rodrigc at crodrigues.org
Wed Aug 31 21:32:02 UTC 2011


On Tue, Aug 30, 2011 at 7:41 AM, Warren Block <wblock at wonkity.com> wrote:
>
> Overall, looks quite good.  A few minor suggestions:
>
> 31.8.1
>
>  "5. Enable inetd"
>      Use &man.inetd.8; instead of plain "inetd".  Might be needed for
>      other commands, or at least the first mention of them.
>
>  "11. Replace "myhost.mydomain.com" with the hostname"
>      Use <replaceable>myhost.example.com</replaceable>, maybe also use
>      it in the programlisting.
>
>  "14. Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} in a chroot environment by"
>      Can be read three ways:
>       1. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot-environment by"
>       2. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot's environment by"
>       3. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} by using a chroot environment"
>
>       Some rearrangement of that sentence could help.
>
> Thanks!
>

Hi,

Thanks.  I have incorporated your feedback and updated the page:

http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/doc/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-pxe-nfs.html

and the patch is here:

http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/nfs-pxe.diff.txt

-- 
Craig Rodrigues
rodrigc at crodrigues.org



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