docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4

Ben Kaduk kaduk at mit.edu
Thu Aug 18 00:20:08 UTC 2011


>Number:         159854
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       grammar updates for carp.4
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Aug 18 00:20:07 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        9-current
>Organization:
MIT SIPB
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:
Some grammar fixups for carp.4 (also a piece of markup).
There was also a long line and trailing whitespace in one spot, so I have a separate whitespace.diff.txt to be applied prior to the main diff.  I only get one attachment in the webform, so the second diff will come in as a reply to the ticket.
>How-To-Repeat:
man 4 carp
>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- carp.4.orig	2011-08-17 14:12:08.000000000 -0400
+++ carp.4.whitespace	2011-08-17 14:13:19.000000000 -0400
@@ -38,7 +38,8 @@
 .Nm
 interface is a pseudo-device that implements and controls the
 CARP protocol.
-CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local network to share a set of IP addresses.
+CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local
+network to share a set of IP addresses.
 Its primary purpose is to ensure that these
 addresses are always available, but in some configurations
 .Nm
@@ -184,7 +185,7 @@
 event.
 Please see
 .Xr devd.conf 5
-and 
+and
 .Sx EXAMPLES
 section for more information.
 .Sh EXAMPLES


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