docs/147812: [handbook] [patch] Corrects English usage in NIS slave server setup in the Handbook

[Johann Kois]

The following reply was made to PR docs/147812; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Johann Kois <jkois at FreeBSD.org>
To: bug-followup at FreeBSD.org, diver06 at gmx.net
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/147812: [handbook] [patch] Corrects English usage in NIS
 slave server setup in the Handbook
Date: Wed, 07 Jul 2010 11:54:00 +0200

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 Hm,
 
 not sure if removing the commas would improve this paragraph.  I think
 it would be better to rephrase this sentence completely.  At the moment
 it is quite complicated and a little bit difficult to understand in my
 opinion.
 
 I will try to do something about that.
 
 jkois
 
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  Johann Kois
  jkois(at)FreeBSD.org
  FreeBSD Documentation Project
  FreeBSD German Documentation Project - https://doc.bsdgroup.de
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