docs/127027: update to fbsd handbook

Eitan Adler eitan.adler+fbsd at gmail.com
Mon Sep 1 18:50:02 UTC 2008


>Number:         127027
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       update to fbsd handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
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>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 01 18:50:01 UTC 2008
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>Originator:     Eitan Adler
>Release:        -
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>Description:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/arch-handbook/boot-kernel.html 
"To where exactly is the execution passed by the loader, i.e. what is the kernel's actual entry point. Let us take a look at the command that links the kernel:"
should read 
"In order to see where the kernel is actually loaded you need to examine the command that links the kernel"  or something to that extent.  The current text is barely proper English.
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