docs/76985: [PATCH] faq-mailing-list article corrections

Jesus R. Camou jcamou at cox.net
Tue Feb 1 23:20:13 UTC 2005


>Number:         76985
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] faq-mailing-list article corrections
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 01 23:20:13 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.cox.net 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #4: Sun Jan 30 06:26:38 MST 2005 root at opensea.cox.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OPENSEA i386

>Description:

	Fix some mistakes and bump copyright year.  

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

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Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mailing-list-faq/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.4 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	8 Aug 2004 13:43:55 -0000	1.4
+++ article.sgml	1 Feb 2005 00:49:23 -0000
@@ -20,6 +20,7 @@
 
     <copyright>
       <year>2004</year>
+      <year>2005</year>
       <holder>The &os; Documentation Project</holder>
     </copyright>
 
@@ -52,7 +53,7 @@
      <para>This document attempts to represent a community consensus, and
        as such it can never really be <emphasis>authoritative</emphasis>.
        However, if you find technical errors within this document, or
-       have suggestions about items that should be added, plase either
+       have suggestions about items that should be added, please either
        submit a PR, or email the &a.doc;.  Thanks.</para>
 
     <qandaset>
@@ -232,7 +233,7 @@
 
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>Personal attacks are discouraged.  As good
-		net.citizens, we should try to hold ourselves to high
+		net citizens, we should try to hold ourselves to high
 		standards of behavior.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
@@ -258,7 +259,7 @@
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>Please respect that fact that bandwidth is not
+	      <para>Please respect the fact that bandwidth is not
 		infinite.  Not everyone reads email through high-speed
 		connections, so if your posting involves something like
 		the content of <filename>config.log</filename> or an
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