Update for www/amd64/motherboards.sgml - please review

[Pav Lucistnik]

Martin Cracauer píše v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:58 -0400:
> Pav Lucistnik wrote on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM +0200: 
> > Martin Cracauer píse v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:45 -0400:
> > > Can somebody who has the SGML system running and is a native speaker
> > > of English please review the appended diff?
> > > 
> > > It contains entries for the 4 mainboards that I tried with
> > > FreeBSD/AMD64 recently.
> > 
> > I'm the lord of motherboard page...
> > 
> > Could you please make the Notes fields a little less verbose, and drop
> > all strictly non-technical stuff? Check 
> > http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/amd64/motherboards.html
> > for inspiration. No prices, no reviews, no feelings, just terse notes
> > about what works with FreeBSD and what not.
> 
> I don't think that would be too useful.  Things are a little more
> complicated than just "works" or not.
> 
> I'll drop some of the pure impression stuff, lets see how we are doing
> then. 

Sure, that's what I had in mind.

> > Also please wrap the lines at 72. Or I can fix the style once we're
> > happy with the content.
> 
> OK, I was just following the style of the other entries.

They should probably be fixed too. As I said, style can be fixed later.

> > More notes:
> > - Dual-core Opteron == Opteron rev. E.
> 
> No, different things.  All dual-cores are E steppings, but there are
> single-core E stepping processors, too.

Ah.

No patch attached, BTW.

-- 
Pav Lucistnik <pav at oook.cz>
              <pav at FreeBSD.org>

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