firewall section of handbook
matthew_mcgraw at yahoo.com
Mon Jun 14 21:41:06 UTC 2004
matthew here from the freebsd-doc list. i have reviewed your firewall section and i must say that your content is excellent. i am a relativly new fbsd user myself, and i got much out of your document. kudos to you.
i have volunteered my services as an editor/proofreader to the group so i read your docs with that in mind. attached to this email, please find a word (.doc) document reflecting some edits to your work. i colored my changes/edits and tried to include comments in italics so you could understand where i was coming from.
i hope this is seen as helpful and not as an insult to your work. as i said before, your content is top-notch. my suggestions are only to improve readability/grammar.
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