[Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft

Tom Rhodes trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Thu Sep 4 18:43:46 UTC 2003

On Thu, 4 Sep 2003 19:28:36 +0100
Ceri Davies <ceri at freebsd.org> wrote:

> On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > Greetings -doc team, Robert,
> > 
> > Please see the diff and give me feedback.  This has already gone
> > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's
> > review.  Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's"
> > now.
> OK, here are my comments (the ones I posted earlier were not from me,
> but posted on behalf of my brother), from a quick scan.
>        servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk

Well, that – is something minor that needs fixed, like 'security(7)'
and some other things.

The rest of your changes are fine, and I applied the diff.  Thanks for
the catching!  :)

> I have attached a diff against your diff containing fixes for all the above,
> but feel free to not use any you don't agree with.

Diff the diff with a .diff, yo!  ... God I need help. :)

Tom Rhodes

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