[Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft
trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Thu Sep 4 18:43:46 UTC 2003
On Thu, 4 Sep 2003 19:28:36 +0100
Ceri Davies <ceri at freebsd.org> wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > Greetings -doc team, Robert,
> > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone
> > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's
> > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's"
> > now.
> OK, here are my comments (the ones I posted earlier were not from me,
> but posted on behalf of my brother), from a quick scan.
> servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk
Well, that – is something minor that needs fixed, like 'security(7)'
and some other things.
The rest of your changes are fine, and I applied the diff. Thanks for
the catching! :)
> I have attached a diff against your diff containing fixes for all the above,
> but feel free to not use any you don't agree with.
Diff the diff with a .diff, yo! ... God I need help. :)
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