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[Simon L. Nielsen]

On 2003.11.17 16:33:57 -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote:
> On Mon, 2003-11-17 at 16:32, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
> > Ken Smith <kensmith at cse.Buffalo.EDU> wrote:
> > > On Sun, Nov 16, 2003 at 01:28:39PM -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote:
> > > 
> > > > Yeah, that's fine.  Thanks!
> > > 
> > > How's this?  It's viewable in a very stripped-down web version at:
> > > 
> > > http://www.cse.buffalo.edu/~kensmith/FreeBSD/cluster_article.html
> > > 
> 
> Fixed, thanks!

Now that we are at the little things... :-)

When you use the trademark entities in the body of the text, then the
coresponding attributions entities should be used in the header.  Since you
use sparc and i386 it should be like this:

    <legalnotice id="trademarks" role="trademarks">
      &tm-attrib.freebsd;
      &tm-attrib.intel;
      &tm-attrib.sparc;
      &tm-attrib.general;
    </legalnotice>

I also noticed that there are some end-of-line whitespace in the SGML
file which should be removed, and some spaces in the beginnig of lines,
which should be tabs (see [1]).

[1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html#WRITING-STYLE-GUIDE

-- 
Simon L. Nielsen
FreeBSD Documentation Team
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