cvs commit: ports UPDATING

[Doug Barton]

On Wed, 28 Jul 2010, Matthias Andree wrote:

> mandree     2010-07-28 22:52:28 UTC
>
>  FreeBSD ports repository
>
>  Modified files:
>    .                    UPDATING
>  Log:
>  Minor speling and Capitalization and a few legibility changes.
>
>  Revision  Changes    Path
>  1.952     +9 -9      ports/UPDATING
>
> http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/ports/UPDATING.diff?&r1=1.951&r2=1.952&f=h

The extra comma you added in the libassuan entry makes it worse, not 
better. Generally less commas is a better editorial choice, written 
English is not supposed to emulate the same cadences as spoken English.

Also, as much as I am supportive of the idea of improving our 
documentation, I'm not sure that the value of constantly revising old 
UPDATING entries exceeds the cost of the churn in the repo.


Doug

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