cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
dougb at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jan 4 21:28:23 UTC 2010
Gavin Atkinson wrote:
> On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
>> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
>> Modified files:
>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
>> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
>> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
>> unexpanded example.
>> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.
>> <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
>> earlier all ports scripts should use
>> - <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
>> + <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
>> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.
> This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is
> better than any rewording I can come up with.
Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the
period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box,
so it looks like this:
. If the service
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