cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
gavin at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jan 4 21:11:33 UTC 2010
On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
> Modified files:
> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
> unexpanded example.
> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.
> <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
> earlier all ports scripts should use
>- <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
>+ <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.
This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is
better than any rewording I can come up with.
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