cvs commit: www/en index.xsl

[Remko Lodder]

On Wed, December 31, 2008 5:00 am, Murray Stokely wrote:
> murray      2008-12-31 04:00:29 UTC
>
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>
>   Modified files:
>     en                   index.xsl
>   Log:
>   Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org.
>
>   We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why
>   FreeBSD is relevant and interesting.  Spending half of the paragraph
>   listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is
>   not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD
>   (to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms).
>
>   Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to
>   entice users to click through to more of the second level pages:
>   FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer
>   platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some
>   of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over
>   30 years of continuous development, etc..
>
>   Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of
>   the Handbook.
>
>   Reviewed by:    marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn)
>

Hey Murray!

Thanks!! This does sound very cool!


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