cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml

[Christian Brueffer]

brueffer    2007-04-29 15:56:59 UTC

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  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking 
                                                       chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reworded sentences to avoid second person usage, some grammar fixes,
  other linguistic improvements.
  
  Reviewed by:    trhodes
  
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