cvs commit: www/en about.sgml

Daniel Gerzo gerzo at micronet.sk
Tue Nov 7 19:26:30 UTC 2006


Hello Ceri,

Tuesday, November 7, 2006, 7:55:52 PM, you wrote:


>> | @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
>> |                     including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape,
>> |                     an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network
>> |                     connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over
>> | -                   anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is
>> | +                   anonymous FTP or NFS.  All you need are
>> |                     <a
>> |                       href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these
>> |                     directions</a>.</p>

> This change isn't correct - "these directions" is the object of this
> sentence and the verb "is" should agree with the subject "all you need",
> which is singular.

Tom said it's correct with "are", Cc:-ing him.

> See sections 5.23 and 5.24 of the CMS.

> Ceri

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Best regards,
 Daniel                            mailto:gerzo at micronet.sk



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