cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml
Gary W. Swearingen
garys at FreeBSD.org
Tue Sep 13 11:23:09 PDT 2005
garys 2005-09-13 18:23:09 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml
Log:
Inserted a missing parenthesis, hyphen, comma, an "a", a "the", and
-- Removed "for" from "caused for the system".
-- Changed "filesystem" to "file system".
-- Changed "base base" to "base".
-- Replaced a comma with a semicolon.
-- Changed "We skip using" to "We avoid using".
-- Changed ", i.e.:" to "; i.e.,".
-- Down-cased "In" at the start of a sentence fragment.
Approved by: keramida
Revision Changes Path
1.10 +12 -12 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml
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