cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/mac
chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml
eadler at freebsd.org
Sat Mar 17 14:09:46 UTC 2012
On Sat, Mar 17, 2012 at 8:09 AM, Gavin Atkinson <gavin at freebsd.org> wrote:
>> 1.13 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard/chapter.sgml
> This was an intentional use of "that that", and your change alters the
> meaning of the sentence.
I dislike the construction 'that that'. Perhaps the wording should be
"NULL entries mean that the corresponding part of entry..."? Can you
propose different text that works better?
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