cvs commit: ports UPDATING
Doug Barton
dougb at FreeBSD.org
Thu Jul 29 05:42:36 UTC 2010
On Wed, 28 Jul 2010, Matthias Andree wrote:
> mandree 2010-07-28 22:52:28 UTC
>
> FreeBSD ports repository
>
> Modified files:
> . UPDATING
> Log:
> Minor speling and Capitalization and a few legibility changes.
>
> Revision Changes Path
> 1.952 +9 -9 ports/UPDATING
>
> http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/ports/UPDATING.diff?&r1=1.951&r2=1.952&f=h
The extra comma you added in the libassuan entry makes it worse, not
better. Generally less commas is a better editorial choice, written
English is not supposed to emulate the same cadences as spoken English.
Also, as much as I am supportive of the idea of improving our
documentation, I'm not sure that the value of constantly revising old
UPDATING entries exceeds the cost of the churn in the repo.
Doug
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