cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml

[Doug Barton]

Gavin Atkinson wrote:
> On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
>> dougb       2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
>>
>>   Modified files:
>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml 
>>   Log:
>>   Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
>>   did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
>>   unexpanded example.
>>   
>>   Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.
> 
>>       <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
>> 	earlier all ports scripts should use
>> -	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
>> +	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
>> 	runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.
> 
> This is now grammatically incorrect.  I actually think the original is 
> better than any rewording I can come up with.

Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the
period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box,
so it looks like this:

. If the service


Doug

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