cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml

[Gavin Atkinson]

On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
> dougb       2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
>   did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
>   unexpanded example.
>   
>   Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.

>       <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
> 	earlier all ports scripts should use
>-	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
>+	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
> 	runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.

This is now grammatically incorrect.  I actually think the original is 
better than any rewording I can come up with.

Gavin