cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop article.sgml

[Gabor Pali]

pgj         2008-09-26 11:44:17 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop article.sgml 
  Log:
  Update articles/gjournal-desktop to fix a few minor issues I found
  during its translation recently:
  
  - Fix capitalization issues in titles according to the Chicago Manual of Style
  - Update Manolis' e-mail address to his FreeBSD.org one
  - Correct some misspelled words, like "filesystem" or "soft updates" according
    to the word list in FDP Primer [1]
  - Add <replaceable> elements to minor versions in "FreeBSD 7.X"
  - Replace bogus <filename role="device"> markups with <filename
    class="devicefile"> elements
  - Rewrite "NGb" constructs to "N&nbsp;GB"
  - Rename sysinstall's disk label editor to <application>Disklabel</application>
    partition editor, in reflect of the corresponding sections of the FreeBSD
    Handbook [2]
  - Replace <keycap>up</keycap> and <keycap>down</keycap> markups with a more
    general form, similar to the Handbook [2]
  - Mark up user commands with <userinput> inside <screen> elements
  - Use <filename> and <devicename> where applicable
  - Fix typos (like "ads1s1d")
  - Mark up Enter key with <keycap>Enter</keycap>
  - Mark up Ivan Voras (ivoras@) with his now-official Handbook entity
  - Mark up usernames with <username>
  
  [1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html
  [2] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/install-steps.html
  
  Reviewed by:    manolis, keramida
  Approved by:    gabor (mentor)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.3       +110 -110  doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.sgml